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You asked me how to win my heart
You say you don't know where to start
But why? You silly boy, you
You have it, and you'll keep it too
For who else was there ever saw
The real me and stood in awe
And didn't turn to run…

I've known the truth for some time now
And still I wonder why and how
It is you see the worst of me
But never give up, still believe
And never walk away...

I'll love you now, and still tomorrow
All my tears and all my sorrow
Gone forever, washed away
Thanking God he let you stay
And love me 'til the end of time
One and only, only mine
I'll never let you go…

I love you, silly boy of mine
It's you who makes
my poetry
rhyme.

:)
©2009 ~crazyamy93
:iconcrazyamy93:

Author's Comments

(deep breath)...my very first ever RHYMING poem!
so yeah it's pretty goofy and the last line is horrid and cheesy (but I couldn't resist putting it in).
I had just never written a poem with rhymes before, so thought I would give it a try.
:heart: :heart: :)

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:iconvogue-angel:
aww :love: what a sweet poem!

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"Life is TOO long when you're living to DIE."
~John W Spengler
:iconcrazyamy93:
lol, thanks. It's not really from the heart all that much...I was just trying to get it to rhyme. :D
But it could be...maybe a little bit...:heart: :heart: :love:

--
A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world.
~Oscar Wilde

My gallery: [link]
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:iconvogue-angel:
hehe, cute : )

--
"Life is TOO long when you're living to DIE."
~John W Spengler
:iconcrazyamy93:
lol...yeeeeah...:aww: hehe

--
A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world.
~Oscar Wilde

My gallery: [link]
...Come check it out, you'll be glad you did. :D

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